Very nice. Chief Izuma seemed a bit nicers than he usually is (or will be).
I think that you should probably wait a bit before doing the background stories, but only if you want sleep. ^^
Keep up the good work.
~K3k

Goodness, that wasn't very nice of Agis. He's still a tad creepy, but I suppose he isn't that bad. The Song popped into my head again. Oh well.
~K3k

Chief Rosalin sounds slightly biased about Gifted people. Agis wear white satin gloves? goodness, he's certainly...careful about his appearance. It seems that the's story's tempo is about to pick up, hm?
Much love, K3k

This looks interesting, please update!

Remember my urge to hug him and give him a teddy bear? It just increased tenfold. Poor baby!
~K3k

And you said my 'second chances' thing was emo...You so just beat that. And why would we want to kill you? I have much lovelove for you!