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| My World Of Fragile Things 2008-04-18 ch 1,  | abuseit wasnt as bold as i expected it to be. but i like the imagery. keep up the good work |
| Its That Fozzie Bear 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseWow i really like this lol I like how you get it to rhyme but still make it sound good lmso I can never seem to do that lol You eyes say a lot so its kind of true to you because there dazzling :P Fozzie Bear X X X |
| concerto49 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseNever really thought about eyes like that. Only thing was that you suddenly changed to second person at the end. It was interesting in that eyes could be described that way. Cheers. Anyhow. |