I think I've fallen for Salem. Lol. He's hotness. But he seems too good to be true; and whoever shall Alice choose in the end? Anywho, it's been ages since you updated! YOU MUST DO SO! I demand it. :D

Lol. One should always care whether readers are reviewing or not; it's always nice to beg them to review and threaten not to update. The lurkers tend to respond to that. Lol. And to get more people to read, you should go around to random stories and review, tossing in a little line about how you would appreciate if they reviewed yours; most people return a review for a reveiew. Hence why I'm here, though it's been a while. Lol. I've not been in a reading mood in a while, and was just going through reviews and clicking on people to see if they'd written something that seemed interesting enough to read: Only your story did. Lol. Anyways, about the chapter: It's great! I like Alice. She's one of those few female characters I can actually stand. Lol. And Randy being British is bloody brillant! I absolutely adore British people...XD

"1461-1786"

Was Emlynne supposed to be 325 years old? Lol.

Anyways, I liked this chapter: The whole gravestone thing was hella rad and I would very much like to see what Emlynne's life story that Alice read was. And as for big words, you did overdose, but then, I do it all the time! Big Words = Good words! ^_^

Everyone is so proper in this story! "I must take a brisk walk," and "We must apologize." It's really kind of amusing. Lol. Good work, love; time for the next chapter.

"I felt as though I was about to be a murder victim."

LOL! I thought that was terribly ironic after reading the story summary!

Anywho, I really enjoy this. I'm gonna go and read more now. ^_^

Oh...drama, drama! I likey! Usually I don't get into girl/boy romance stories, but I figured that since it's you, it's gotta be good and so I'm reading it and liking it so far. Now, I shall move on to the next chapter. :D

I LOVE IT, AMI.

Simply amazing! You MUST update soon! :D

~ Love, SWISS

Wow this is fantastic ami! The characters are really complex and well developed. Please continue. Just fantastic!

O, is Salem a vampire-killer too, suspense, lol Sorry for the dramatics, it makes reviewing more fun, lol
Can't wait for the next chapter
~Amanda~

i like the story it is very intertaining... i hope i can read more, unless you are detremined to start again when she is older if so i would love to read that one then ^.^

Good story so far, I just have one question: Is she going to be 13 throughout the whole story, or the majority of it or whatever or is she going to get older, like one of those however many years later type things?
~Amanda~
P.S. The reason I'm asking such a strange question like that is because, if she's going to fall in love or something, 13 may be a little too young, but I guess if you have a plan, it's okay, you are the author after all, anyways, sorry for the stupid question because it clearly indicates in the first chapter that she is not 13 anymore, but I just wanted to know
P.P.S Sorry for the really long message, lol