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Reviews For: Kyung's Different Faces

EmilyAlice10
2007-08-10
ch 1,
abuseomg, emma, i LOVE this! it's hilarious! I can so see kyung it this!! awesome job!! keep writing!!
kyung
2007-07-30
ch 1, anon.
abusei feel like im obligated to kill you right now emma
Sincerely- Your Worst Enemy
2007-07-30
ch 1,
abuseHa! That was entertaining! It was a little confusing bunched into a single paragraph, but its still readable! I really liked this as almost a prologue-monologue! Good! I'm excited to read more! UPDATE SOON!

=) Kay
concerto49
2007-07-29
ch 1,
abuse'faces' - did you mean persona? I think that's the right word.
It could have been worded better. It was a little too colloquial.
Haven't seen a monologue in ages...reminds me.
Bunching it all in one paragraph perhaps wasn't such a good idea, even if it was a play.
Anyhow. Cheers.
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