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| EmilyAlice10 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseomg, emma, i LOVE this! it's hilarious! I can so see kyung it this!! awesome job!! keep writing!! |
| kyung 2007-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abusei feel like im obligated to kill you right now emma |
| Sincerely- Your Worst Enemy 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseHa! That was entertaining! It was a little confusing bunched into a single paragraph, but its still readable! I really liked this as almost a prologue-monologue! Good! I'm excited to read more! UPDATE SOON! =) Kay |
| concerto49 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuse'faces' - did you mean persona? I think that's the right word. It could have been worded better. It was a little too colloquial. Haven't seen a monologue in ages...reminds me. Bunching it all in one paragraph perhaps wasn't such a good idea, even if it was a play. Anyhow. Cheers. |