hmm. intresting. good work

Whoa, that's a powerful way to describe the fear for the future! That was unique! Never seen anything like it! This was great! You have a gift for choosing the right words to express yourself! Keep writing!
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Wow! Perfect! Brilliant! It's so simple, and your meaning comes out of it so well. It's a great way to put it - like on a path. Brilliant poem!

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