very way you feel when you are unloved. good job

I loved the ending, that it's so different from the rest. I liked the fact that you kept it short, understandable, yet mysterious. Good writing!

This was so beautiful, though sad. It'll go in my favorites.
I liked how you kept it so short and simple, but yet had so much meaning hidden in the words.
Great job with this! Write more!
The Reverse Edge Blade

Wow...

Powerful!! All the anguish of a relationship gone sour storied in just a few lines. Very nice job!

Wow. Nice, short, sweet and to the point entirely. Loved it!

BFQ

unseeing didn't sound that right? Perhaps unseen would have been more fit?
It was rather cool, interesting, and provoking.
It was surely all - un's there.
Anyhow. Cheers.
PS: Was it a haiku? I still can't remember the rules. *Thinks hard*