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Laura Schiller
2007-12-16
ch 1,
abuseIt's an interesting question...if I had wings, they'd probably be light blue, calm and dreamy, with darker blue streaks for depressed moments. Reading all those reviews is interesting too - pink and orange? That clashes horribly! :)
Darkened1
2007-09-25
ch 1,
abuseBlack with red tints. Not because i'm depresse, but because I encompass every emotion, determination, joy, sorrow, they all meld together to create the black of my wings. They, like yours, are torn and beaten, used and have been shattered, but they can still fly, still carry me. Red tints because I seem to have a little more spit in me than anyone (including myself) realized.

Once again, you have astounded me.
Snip2r
2007-07-31
ch 1,
abuseMy wing is silver, reflecting all that is around me.
My soul is brown, as I come from and will return to the earth.
My personality are shades of gray, because it is the most colorful thing, in the world.
Still Pretending
2007-07-30
ch 1,
abusethat was really deep and i really made me think. I'm usually not into this genre... essays. probably cuz i dont think i could write one. one of substance and satisfaction anyway. but anywho ur piece was really good. I hope you write more...

and for the queestion... i would think midnight blue, cuz its one of those dark colors that stand out and speaks for itself, without being too bright and almost to the point of fake cheerfulness.
RuathaWehrling
2007-07-30
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting. What a pretty question!

And I hope, as you grow and escape whatever troubles you're in now, your "wings" will grow with you and change color to match.

Take care!
Ruatha
life on rewind
2007-07-29
ch 1,
abuseMy soul and wings are clear. I'm a superficial, empty, narrow-minded **, frankly.

I very much loved this piece ... but is it really an essay?
just another random
2007-07-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is really cool. Pretty deep. I love your writing. It's weird reading your blurb on your profile which is, lets face it, a bit nuts:D, then reading these amazing deep angsty bits of writing.
Keep it up, I love your style:D
I'd say my wings are a kind of dark orange. I always try to look on the bright side, I'm painfully optimistic and I'm a total hippy, but there's a kind of dark, passionate side to me too. As for my soul... ooh its probably a really dark pink - bitchy and slightly evil but still desperate to be different and unique:D
Never thought about that before. It's sweet.
JAR
maximusrexmundi
2007-07-29
ch 1,
abusemy wings, as well as my soul, would be various shades of grey. There is cold emptiness and burning passion, all mixed in what could only be described as a futile war.
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