WOW!! HAHAHAH WOOT WOOT!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! he.. hehe... do u realize... if they ever "get together" so to speak... that he could get ARRESTED!! hehehe not that i dont mind... heheheh!!

I like the emo kid. Although he sounds like he's the bad guy. I always have an awful habit of falling for them.
Anyways, love the OCD part. I wonder if Talen's figured it out yet?
Lee

Totally awesome. I like it!

yay update! talan is lovely too. 'How clean is your house' always makes me feel guilty for having a messy room though. keep writing!

I like your opening chapters, I think your story has great potential. I'm curious as to the definition of a NED though. Also, are chavs as yet an unexisting species in Scotland?

i love this chapter its really good
i hope he falls for Aiden and not his neighbor

Random molesting ... but it seems to be in a good way.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like Aiden and Nathaniel, you should have more of their relationship.

:) I like it! It shows that OCD can cause lots of unnecessary problems and you do good at remembering he has it too and don't use it just whenever the story allows it! Good job.

hey...wtf...what was with that Aiden kid? I want Talanoh well, still liking the story...and what does NED and scaff mean?

Aiden came from know where... You need to put Scene kid in your story :]

I like it

OH NO! I'm one of those people who didn't review, but I put you on my alert thingy.

Gosh darn.

Okay so... I think this story is pretty amazing. Which is ALSO why I think you should have a fast update, with a long chapter. So get writing!

FAB FAB FAB!
cant wait for the next bit, Nathan is such a loveable character :]
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like this story.