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AJS 2008-02-15 . chapter 1
Aww how cute. The only thing would be that being the daughter of a genius such as Osamu whose intellect was apparent from very early ages, and also Sara being quite bright herself, you would think that their daughter would be really smart too. I think though, rather than a bunch of one shots, you should just write the sequel, Lullabye :) I don't know. Somehow I think it would have more of a plot than just random snippets of their lives.

Anyways, happy writing! :)

-- Alyssa
EdwardDazzlesMe 2007-11-19 . chapter 1
Haha, little Alicia's so cute... This little oneshot made me giggle.
mia5081 2007-07-31 . chapter 1
Haha Alicia is hilarious, and totally reminds me of my little cousin who acts just like her. And yes! to the one-shots, as long as you promise to continue Lullabye even if I am still a little confused about whats going on...Osamu must be freaking out lol
~Mia
midnightbeauty 2007-07-31 . chapter 1
Aww, that's so sad :'( It's a good one-shot type thingy though...I love your writing :)
Kisses,
midnightbeauty
Kylie1403 2007-07-30 . chapter 1
OMG its so cute i LOVE IT!

awz poor baby!
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AnswerKey 2007-07-30 . chapter 1
That was so adorable. I'd totally understand a three-year old saying that.
Nyleve Nalloc 2007-07-29 . chapter 1
I liked this-- she is so funny.

You know, that one-shot collection idea doesn't sound so bad. =]
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