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| FreakierThanThou 2008-01-23 ch 10, | abuseStudent Service? What's that? Like a Teacher's Assistant or something? Still lovin' the characters, they're all so quirky and amazingly wonderfuly. I like Reagan's obsession with saving the chairs from Allie. “Tooth and freakin’ nail!” He's such a freak. Neat how Camille is getting better at typing. Although I'm still a little bit confused about why their class is so incredibly small, that's the only thing that makes sense for the story. They probably just have a tiny school. And you probably explained this already and I just don't remember. The only problem I have with this chapter is that it's way too short. It makes me sad. I wanna read more! ;) Keep writing, -Freaky |
| Serom Kim 2008-01-22 ch 10, | abuseThere are only three words to describe this chapter: Best. Ending. Ever. I liked the way you described how nobody spoke because their jaws were all on the floor. Allie is the new student service? Strange ... wonder how it'll go. Can't believe that this chapter was updated three days ago ... I missed it! |
| BeautifulAssassin 2008-01-20 ch 10, | abuseThe chair-stealer is the new student service...are we going to find out why she steals chairs? Or does she really collect furniture? |
| BeautifulAssassin 2008-01-10 ch 9, | abuseYay!! You updated!! Chair stealer? Wow...They ending was funny..."It was mine"...why the frig does she steal chairs? update soon? |
| Serom Kim 2007-12-16 ch 9, | abuseFinally updated, eh? Interesting ... chair-stealers, never would have thought of that. I liked the ending where Camille says, "It was mine." |
| FreakierThanThou 2007-12-16 ch 9, | abuseYou're back! You updated! I love you for this, just so you know. I was just thinking the other day "Why is 'Classroom' never update? I miss it so much!" And then you did. Okay, now I'm actually going to review, instead of just rant about how amazing it is. Except, of course, that's going to be my entire review. You know it. I really like the addition of the Chair-Stealing Menace. Could it be... plot? I want to know why she steals the chairs, and why she only does it after being sent on an errand. I'm curious. And hilarified, as usual. Great job. I'd review longer, but I don't really have time right now. I hope you get the next chapter up soon! Keep writing, -Fran |
| Sercus Kaynine 2007-11-11 ch 8, | abuseWait, how long are their classes? The beginning must've taken longer than I thought. OMG! I've heard of Monty Python! Score! An Ian/Emily relationship, huh? Update soon! |
| Sercus Kaynine 2007-11-11 ch 7, | abuseWell, I'm curious about Emily's shows, too. I've heard of The Office, but that's about it... Some people took off the keys on our school laptops last year. Let's just say there wasn't a very 'light' punishment involved. |
| Sercus Kaynine 2007-11-11 ch 6, | abuseIt's Potter Puppet Pals! Yay! That spoof really can cheer anyone up. My favorites are The Mysterious Ticking Noise and Trouble at Hogwarts. Poor, poor, Vanessa. It really teaches you not to be too judgmental, doesn't it? |
| Sercus Kaynine 2007-11-11 ch 5, | abuseGeez, I always enjoy reading, but I can never think of anything to comment about. It's infuriating. Hmm... Well, going with the final theme of the chapter, I'll ramble about Johny Depp and Orlando Bloom. I think they're both pretty good-looking, but I'm not one to obsess over the opposite sex. I'm really not the boy crazy type. Though I do think I have an obsession with the character Jack Sparrow, who is played by Johny Depp, so... But anyways. Wonder if Ian will have more to say now that he's part of the gang? |
| Sercus Kaynine 2007-11-11 ch 4, | abuseAnd everywhere I look, there is high school drama. But wait, what's this? Typing Girl has a name! And I wonder what happened to Venessa? Humorous, as always. |
| Sercus Kaynine 2007-11-09 ch 3, | abuseAnd here we see the first blossoms of friendship. And what's this? Maybe Ian will join the group, too. F.J.F.J.F.J.F.J.F.J.F.J.F.J.F.J.F.J.F.J.F.J.F.J.F.J.F.J... blah blah blah 0.o How do they stand it? |
| Sercus Kaynine 2007-11-09 ch 2, | abuseOkay, I have to correct myself. Typing Girl wouldn't disapprove of my typing skills. I'd probably BE Typing Girl. We just seem so alike somehow. One of my closest friends would be Ian, without the internet obsession. (My friend's a cynic) This is still a funny story. |
| Sercus Kaynine 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseUsually, I can't get into this high school drama stuff, but this is really funny. I think I've fallen in love with all of the characters already (except, maybe, for Mrs. Drysdale, but you get it). I don't think Typing Girl would like me very much. I don't peck out the letters, but I definitely don't use the "correct typing position". They tried to teach us that in elementary and I never caught on. Anyways, this is a nice story you've got here. Good work. :) |
| Imalefty 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abusehahahahaha, your characters are awesome. i love them all - shifty seat/typing girl, vanessa, ian, and camille. :) oh, and mrs. drysdale... her story is so sad. XD i have... no criticism at all. (that i can think of, that is)great job!! -Lefty |