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Reviews For: His 'Inspirational' Speech
HJWG 2007-08-23 . chapter 1
WOAH it's great, this is the stuff poetry's made of
EmeraldsAndPearls33 2007-08-09 . chapter 1
I really like this! It seems like a funny scene from a movie, where the main character can't stop staring at a gap in a school administrator's teeth, and then the gap widens as the camera zooms in and the kid either passes out or wakes up screaming. :D But I also liked the double meaning of "the gap just got bigger". It's a gap in understanding and also one of those sleazy gaps like a car salesman has, and it just keeps getting bigger and more annoying as the guy keeps talking.

Um, backstory, please? I'm curious. :D

Thanks for another poem I can relate to!

Em ;)
Spuriously-WoodsWorth 2007-08-01 . chapter 1
That was very funny.
I loved it, when was this?
Eelex 2007-07-29 . chapter 1
its not hugely funny but it puts a smile on my face. im guessing this is a classroom. lol i watch the clock all the time.
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