I think you should ut the new version on Fiction Press anyway, or an old version.

Hi. I thought I'd stop by here and tell you how amazing your stories are... they're pretty amazing. I love them all.

Your stories nearly flawless, which is so cool, except for one thing:

“No, I weren’t,” Josh said, rolling his eyes. “The rooftop is the only place in this school that offers some privacy, but being with Damian isn’t all that bad. He’s pretty quiet, doesn’t talk all that much.”

I think, just think :), weren't should be "wasn't"

keep writing!

I am sorry to hear that! But i read your profile and the announcement on it and I understand why :) Does that mean that whilst you wont be updating on here, you continue to write and post your stories on your forum? I will join when i have time too :) good luck with everything :) xx

okie! As long as you're rewriting it. I think you should wait until you're ready to post them.

Fine...just give us something!

Nu I love this story! T~T *goes all emo*
Of course you better post it when you get it all ready and done! I really really wanna read the new one! This one was way to awesome so the newer one will be even better!

I was wondering why you hadn't updated in a while.
When I saw that you were discontinuing I was disappointed.
But then I saw that you were rewriting and I was like YES!
Haha, I can't wait to read it.
I think you should put it up when you're prepared to.
:]
Can't wait.

I would love to read your revised version!! Please post it :)

The second half reminds me exactly of the manga "Cut" by Touko Kawai!!

I just found this while searching around FP, and I'm so glad I did. I've spent every spare moment for the past 2 days trying to catch up in the story. It's so utterly amazingly superly spectacularly perfect that I can't begin to describe it. The characters are so...tragic. It hurts to read about their awful lives, but it's addicting, I have to admit. My favorites are definitely Josh and Damian. I can't decide between the two, because I love them both. This is written at a high level, lots of goody good 3 point vocabulary words, and it's also grammatically correct. I'm not gonna rant any further, because while I know that reviews are inspiring and whatnot, this is a bit much...but Scarred Souls deserves it, and so do you for the masterpiece...wow, I sound retarded...

omg YAY! NEW CHARACTERS!!

I love new characters. And I love THESE new characters because they're goth-y and green-hair-y! lol

Update Soon!

Can't wait to meet the new characters and find out more about Madison and Wynn. Poor Chad.

=] awe. that was a very tender chapter ^^ hehe that was sweet and sad and perfect lol

i really like the character development and the emotions that you display ubberdoober welyishly! =D hehe awseomse

10/10
update sooners!

xoxoxo

Ah, I hope Madison continues to be in the story.
I like him, although he was stupid to go with Andrew.
But he needed the money you know?
Is he still gonna be in the story though?
I'm happy for Josh though, although now it's Chad's life that's falling apart as Josh's life is mending.
Spencer and Lesley will still remain my favorite couple though.
I can't wait for the next update.
I hope there's more Madison in it.
:]

Sorry I havent reveiwed in for ever. :\
I just read the whole story over again.
And I still love the whole thingWith every chapter your writing has gotten better and better.
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