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Lauren
2008-06-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really love all of your righting. It's very good. I was just wondering though what book was the one you were inspired by to write this?
Keep up the awesome work!
^-^
miscellanea
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseA really endearing story, it had unique characters. You crafted the scene when she goes to his house really well.
wandless
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseOh, this is incredibly cute! Great job, but I think it needs some editing or redrafting.
Angel of Ink
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abuseOh, and Tom ended up with a potbelly and a wife he didn't love?

That's simply AMAZING. I love it. >.
R. Mushroom
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abuseHAHA.

"Oh, and Tom ended up with a potbelly and a wife he didn't love."

That reminds me of this time I went camping with my friend and her mom, and we went to this bar and there was this plump security guard with a bald spot and her mom said that he was going to be the future Andy. Andy being the - at the time - hot guy in our school. HAHA, so funny.

What book are you talking about in your author's note?
abyssgirl
2008-03-16
ch 1,
abusewhich book would that be? would you recommend it?
RoseLife
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abusenaw
haha loved the ending for Tom!
pinkfluffyoranges
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseThis was unbelievably sweet, so sweet I just may have a toothache :) I loved it, it was hard to follow sometimes because of the lack of dialogue, but it made it more special, unique. There's one lien that I think needs to be edited "She tucked forehead into the crook of his neck and just breathed him." Also, when she sits in front oh hime then curls around him, I think it needs to be made clearer that she hugged him from the back, it was somewhat confusing, and unclear as to what her position was. And her graduation, i believe could use a few extra sentences. Other than that, this story was fantastic. It put a smile on my face. great work!
bookworm925
2008-01-02
ch 1,
abuse:)

it is cute. ;)
xHUGx
2007-11-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh, and Tom ended up with a potbelly and a wife he didn’t love.

HAHAHA.
that's funny.
and that one shot was cute.
AGH, i loved it.
thanks for sharing it with us!
d666lisa
2007-11-05
ch 1,
abuseBRILLIANT STORY. REALLY WELL WRITTEN. WHAT COOL IS IT BASED ON HE YOU DON'T MIND ME ASKING? :-D
Pretty Girls Make Graves
2007-10-28
ch 1,
abuseHuh, I thought I'd reviewed this one.


Well, I hope you know that I like basically all of your writing, but I also really like how you vary your writing style. Even the last two oneshots are completely different (but both are amazing).

Anyway, I just wanted to say what's up, even though you're probably really busy with school right now. Just know that I've been a faithful reader for the past two years! Also, just curious...I understand if you don't want to tell me, but what school do you go to?
wanderingnachos
2007-10-28
ch 1,
abuseso cute! what book was it inspired by? harry potter lolz?
eurtreve
2007-10-21
ch 1,
abusewell now i'm curious, what book inspired this?
ree
2007-09-18
ch 1, anon.
abusei really enjoyed reading this...even without a dialogue.
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