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| Lauren 2008-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really love all of your righting. It's very good. I was just wondering though what book was the one you were inspired by to write this? Keep up the awesome work! ^-^ |
| miscellanea 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseA really endearing story, it had unique characters. You crafted the scene when she goes to his house really well. |
| wandless 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseOh, this is incredibly cute! Great job, but I think it needs some editing or redrafting. |
| Angel of Ink 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseOh, and Tom ended up with a potbelly and a wife he didn't love? That's simply AMAZING. I love it. >. |
| R. Mushroom 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseHAHA. "Oh, and Tom ended up with a potbelly and a wife he didn't love." That reminds me of this time I went camping with my friend and her mom, and we went to this bar and there was this plump security guard with a bald spot and her mom said that he was going to be the future Andy. Andy being the - at the time - hot guy in our school. HAHA, so funny. What book are you talking about in your author's note? |
| abyssgirl 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abusewhich book would that be? would you recommend it? |
| RoseLife 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abusenaw haha loved the ending for Tom! |
| pinkfluffyoranges 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was unbelievably sweet, so sweet I just may have a toothache :) I loved it, it was hard to follow sometimes because of the lack of dialogue, but it made it more special, unique. There's one lien that I think needs to be edited "She tucked forehead into the crook of his neck and just breathed him." Also, when she sits in front oh hime then curls around him, I think it needs to be made clearer that she hugged him from the back, it was somewhat confusing, and unclear as to what her position was. And her graduation, i believe could use a few extra sentences. Other than that, this story was fantastic. It put a smile on my face. great work! |
| bookworm925 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuse:) it is cute. ;) |
| xHUGx 2007-11-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, and Tom ended up with a potbelly and a wife he didn’t love. HAHAHA. that's funny. and that one shot was cute. AGH, i loved it. thanks for sharing it with us! |
| d666lisa 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseBRILLIANT STORY. REALLY WELL WRITTEN. WHAT COOL IS IT BASED ON HE YOU DON'T MIND ME ASKING? :-D |
| Pretty Girls Make Graves 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseHuh, I thought I'd reviewed this one. Well, I hope you know that I like basically all of your writing, but I also really like how you vary your writing style. Even the last two oneshots are completely different (but both are amazing). Anyway, I just wanted to say what's up, even though you're probably really busy with school right now. Just know that I've been a faithful reader for the past two years! Also, just curious...I understand if you don't want to tell me, but what school do you go to? |
| wanderingnachos 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseso cute! what book was it inspired by? harry potter lolz? |
| eurtreve 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abusewell now i'm curious, what book inspired this? |
| ree 2007-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abusei really enjoyed reading this...even without a dialogue. |