I like how when this starts, Kyle is just waiting by the phone waiting for it to ring. Very good introductory. It made me smile and feel instantly sympathetic to her character. And then the sweet scene with the cookies! That was adorable.
First Love... and heartbreak... moving on... it's very nice. By the end, I couldn't decide if I wanted Kyle to keep waiting for Aiden (who would call her), or go to Jon.
-Hiddenstars

Wowzuh. I liked this one a lot, too. You totally had me until the end. I totally thought she was going to wait for Aiden. x]

The element of surprise! (Which I was told I lack... Lol.)

I like it. x]