 TheDJ 2007-08-07 . chapter 4Where's the reviews? I really enjoyed this story: interested to see where it goes and how the *secrets* the sisters are keeping keep revealing themselves. Really well written, could use a bit more descript. language, but yeah, i guess u don't wan't to stall the script. Nice short chapters - perfect for reading in lectures - and plenty of dialougue - I really like it. Keep it up (please?) --TheDJ |