i mean, i know this really has nothing to with dancing and all,

but you can actually see the person who 'you can't dance around'.

which is really cool.

because it adds even more meaning.

so nice job on this.

it's short, but it does say a lot,

and i like it.

a subtle tint of either hate or of passion long dead...

nice...

Wow. Powerful imagery. I love the last line especially. Great job with this piece!