Reviews for Love is a Battlefield

Misplays Early 2008-06-20 ch 1,	abusewow. i really like the idea of it. i must say that when i started reading, i thought it was cleche, but by the end...it isnt, to say the least. well written.
half-sketched.staccatos 2007-09-20 ch 1,	abusekonban wa Wow. Powerful. Amazing. I loved that last line: "It was completely true." The one problem I had with this was the capital "H" in some of the "he" and "him"s. It makes it sound like you're talking about God or something. I know you were trying to emphasize the fear in the narrator's voice, but I think it could be just as easily portrayed with bolded letters or italicized. Gute nacht -Shan-
angel953 2007-08-05 ch 1,	abuseum im scared. good job call me!