|Reviews for An undiscovered hero|
| Cookie Munchkin 2/1/09 . chapter 1
Realistically, the firemen wouldn't have let him back in, but what the hay. [What caused such a fast-spreading fire anyway? O.o]
I rather liked it, tragic though it was. Your writing is very polished, grammar and all, which is a rare occurence from what I have come to see. The only thing I would say is italicize/underline the book titles and maybe italicize Em's thoughts, but that's all.
| LittleDoe 4/26/08 . chapter 1
Sad but good. Richard truly had a noble heart. Well written.
Keep up the good work.
God Bless you.
| lightforlife13 2/13/08 . chapter 1
You're rigth, it is sad. But at the smae time it teaches a lesson. Good story :) light
| Elanor Silmarien 8/2/07 . chapter 1
Wow! Don't apologize for it being too dark and depressing. It was really moving. Wow, I wonder if I would be brave enough to do something heroic like that? Well done, Frodo dear!
| J. Shelley 7/31/07 . chapter 1
Wow! That was good and sad. Richard really was a hero. Em will probably never forget that he got himself killed for someone else. Great job!
| Kindre Turnany 7/30/07 . chapter 1
I liked the story, but not the words that told it. Does that make any sense?