Wow this is good. I like this a lot, and thats saying something.(:

i liked it-- i'm big on the whole silent tears kind of poems. and i love the ideas-- you've inspired me to write something now lol.

Very short, yet very sweet. I loved it, and I like the idea of crying stars. It's beautiful.

konnichi wa

How tormenting... It's the saddest, most poetic thing to hear about a "crying star." I always loved that sort of personification -- stars are so beautiful. Lovely poem.

Zaijen
-Shan-

This is quite good, although the last line doesn't seem to end it in as satisfying a manner as adding anotherfew lines could have. It's all up to you though.

I dont normally like poems that rhyme but you made this work really well, i loved the imagery, well done.