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| -Truly-Verily-Purely-Me- 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI really don't think I'm going to make it through all your stuff tonight, oh well, this one is a little different. I'm always a sucker for love poems. |
| painted.music 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa I loved that last line (and the title). It was the perfect ending to an amazing poem. Two corrections: 1. "Even though your far" -- It should be spelled "you're". 2. "I will be apart of you" -- It should be spelled "a part". I loved this -- so inspiring. :) ki o tsukete nee -Shan- |
| TheLastKiss 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it. It flowed beautifully, and the emotion was amazing. Way to go! |