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Reviews For: Distance Will Not Break Me

-Truly-Verily-Purely-Me-
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseI really don't think I'm going to make it through all your stuff tonight, oh well, this one is a little different. I'm always a sucker for love poems.
painted.music
2007-07-31
ch 1,
abusekonnichi wa

I loved that last line (and the title). It was the perfect ending to an amazing poem.

Two corrections: 1. "Even though your far" -- It should be spelled "you're". 2. "I will be apart of you" -- It should be spelled "a part".

I loved this -- so inspiring. :)

ki o tsukete nee
-Shan-
TheLastKiss
2007-07-31
ch 1,
abuseI really liked it. It flowed beautifully, and the emotion was amazing. Way to go!
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