I really don't think I'm going to make it through all your stuff tonight, oh well, this one is a little different. I'm always a sucker for love poems.

konnichi wa

I loved that last line (and the title). It was the perfect ending to an amazing poem.

Two corrections: 1. "Even though your far" -- It should be spelled "you're". 2. "I will be apart of you" -- It should be spelled "a part".

I loved this -- so inspiring. :)

ki o tsukete nee
-Shan-

I really liked it. It flowed beautifully, and the emotion was amazing. Way to go!