I LOVE IT! You're a very promising writer! The topic is one that many people can identify with, and the way you used God in the story just made it so much better! There were a few errors though (but dont worry we all make them, and i'm very bad about them myself becuause i forget to read over my stuff.)
I hope you'll keep posting your writing!

Phantom (since ur name has Phantom in it too) Star, lol