Did I say you were godly when it came to writing one-shots?
I think I did.
At first I thought this was going to be some kind of "Father loving son a bit too much" kind of slash, which grossed me out a little, but then the lemonade scene came along and I was relieved.
I love the repetitiveness. "William loved his son." And then "David loves his father." "John loved his boyfriend. John didn't love William and William didn't love John."
David punched John in the face?
Anger issues :p
Lovely story! :D

Also, Amazing title! That's the kind of title that pulls readers in!

Wow, that was... incredible. So absolutely beautiful. It gave me that warm and fuzzy feeling inside. Your style on this was amazing. Fantastic!

I loves happy endings.

Ohmygod, that is so sweet. That is seriously the first thing I said when I finished it. This is a very beautiful, simple, and absolutely adorable, adorable piece. It makes me all happy and warm inside. I was really scared something bad was going to happen, but nothing did! Yay!

i know you finished this like a year ago or something, but that was cute. :)

Wow. Probably the best story
I've read all night. Wonderful.

:) Great writing.
Great idea.
Great perspective change.
Great introspection.
Great everything, really.

I enjoyed it times a million.
Great, amazing, wonderful job.

-Dana.

Oh god! That was so cute! So freaking adorable! I love it. That just made me really happy *does happy dance*

That's like...puppies-wearing-rainboots adorable.
I loved it :)

Wow, magalina... That's some great prose. I always tell people I don't dig poetry, I'm a prose man, and now I have something to point to as an example of why.

That was inspiring...

*dances* Cyute!~ Loved it. And so what if it was short, it was neat and niftily written. ;D

hehehe cute ^_^

I liked this a lot... o.o Especially the ending ^_^ Yay William is loving, lol

Aw. Cute.

I admit I was expecting incest...

*cough*

I liked it. :) And I like lemonade myself... But the pink kind because it's sweeter... *mumbles*

xo

Aw, sweet like lemonade. I think my teeth hurt now. ;)