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| failte200 2008-03-18 ch 1,  | abuseWow, magalina... That's some great prose. I always tell people I don't dig poetry, I'm a prose man, and now I have something to point to as an example of why. That was inspiring... |
| Garrett Bringer 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuse*dances* Cyute!~ Loved it. And so what if it was short, it was neat and niftily written. ;D |
| iwishillwilluponyou 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abusehehehe cute ^_^ |
| Rachizzle 2007-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked this a lot... o.o Especially the ending ^_^ Yay William is loving, lol |
| SerialXLain 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseAw. Cute. I admit I was expecting incest... *cough* I liked it. :) And I like lemonade myself... But the pink kind because it's sweeter... *mumbles* xo |
| nonaccount 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseAw, sweet like lemonade. I think my teeth hurt now. ;) |
| Insomiak 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseI like it. I like the name, too. People used to have to hang a sign over their bed, when they wanted to have sex, that read "F.U.C.K.". Or so google told me. Er, and I love the socks and sandles. S'what I wear. Awesome job! Sorry for the lame review. I love the light feel of this... with summer and lemonade... and all(heart) -Inso |
| MistressELEMENT 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abusewow this seems so random but i guess its not since its for the Xanthofile contest thing. I liked it. I really did. Good job! but for some reason the end confuses me but i get it. LOVED IT! HUGS!, -ELEMENT |
| AppLEaves 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseYou make ME happy. ^^ So I think that I should return the favor. XD I love the title by the way. And so much love. Wooh. |
| ShyFoxie 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseI liked how you wrote this, and kind of switched from William to John and back to William. Nice ending too. I'm not sure how the title makes sense, though, as the story wasn't actually about sex or certain choice words at all. |
| Nub in Denial 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseThis was so cute! I like how it was written too. I don't know how to explain it but it feels as though there's a sexy voice in the background telling the reader all about the events as they're happening (kinda like in the movie Little Children if you've ever even seen that) But yeah. This made me smile :) |