|Reviews for Looks Like Rayne|
| Guest 4/21/13 . chapter 1
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| Yellow Cotton Hat 10/1/10 . chapter 3
THIS IS AMAZING!
| fairies and snapple 5/23/09 . chapter 3
This is so interesting! I really hope you continue. Rayne is just so completely adorable.
| i-see-faeries 1/16/09 . chapter 3
Aw, I've always loved Rayne and Bel. Adorable characters. Glad to see this.
| Burlesque Graffiti 1/10/09 . chapter 1
Aww! Rayne and Bel are my faves! They're so adorable. I should be ashamed when I say that because I so desperately want to read a raunchy sex scene with them in it. XD
I hope one day when you have the time, you'll continue with this. It's wonderful so far. I laughed a lot actually, because I finished Wererise on your livejournal and I noted how everything Bel said was right and nearly everything Rayne said was wrong. Cute.
Good work as always! :D
| tmelange1 12/13/08 . chapter 3
This story is riveting. I hope you get back to it one day.
| TheColorOfTheInvisible 11/28/08 . chapter 3
You stoped it? Oh, no. Please, don't!
(you know me from LiveJournal, i'm your brazilian fan who try to write in english.)
| InSilverShadows 2/29/08 . chapter 2
ACK. A flaw!
"He dumped the potatoes into the water and quickly washed off the dirt before leading Belaeden back inside and upstairs. He points out his room, and then the spare room – Wynnd’s old room - across the hall. Belaeden steps inside without a word and shuts the door in Rayne’s face."
There's a big tense chance in this paragraph, into the present tense. It might be because the Once a Slaves are written in the present, but anyways, this story's so good, it ought to be perfect too. :P
| InSilverShadows 2/29/08 . chapter 1
I'll be honest. Rayne is my favorite of all your characters, so it was delightful to get this little gem, but the title very nearly turned me off of it.
| May47 11/12/07 . chapter 3
I've got to say, I love reading your writing. It's sorta hard for me to get into stories, but I've really loved yours and your characters. I hope you'll continue to update this story, because I'm really liking it, and I wait patiently for your published works! Good luck with all that by the way!
| SerialXLain 11/10/07 . chapter 3
Aw... Poor Bel... :(
But Sactaren's goods (...I so got something dirty out of that...) are going to save the day right?
| Valerie 11/8/07 . chapter 3
i'm a freind of Aysha (or snake in the grass) and I love all your stories, just figured i'd finally review and let you know!
Keep up the good work and congrats on gettng published!
| AsiaLisek 10/27/07 . chapter 3
... i'm a total fan. i love your stories, your characters, yer way of writing. when you publish, i'll be there. i. will. be. there. debit card in hand.
ridiculously talented lady, **hugs**
| SaraMaxine 10/27/07 . chapter 3
So, I definately love this story, as much or, surprisingly, more than Magebreak.
Please update this as frequently as possible.
You get: Pop Rocks and Coke! For if you're ever contemplating suicide.
| snarky fox 10/25/07 . chapter 3
Oh my god! Update soon please! Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god! This is getting intense! I need more!