 fairies and snapple 2009-05-23 . chapter 3This is so interesting! I really hope you continue. Rayne is just so completely adorable. |
 i-see-faeries 2009-01-16 . chapter 3Aw, I've always loved Rayne and Bel. Adorable characters. Glad to see this. |
 Burlesque Graffiti 2009-01-10 . chapter 1Aww! Rayne and Bel are my faves! They're so adorable. I should be ashamed when I say that because I so desperately want to read a raunchy sex scene with them in it. XD
I hope one day when you have the time, you'll continue with this. It's wonderful so far. I laughed a lot actually, because I finished Wererise on your livejournal and I noted how everything Bel said was right and nearly everything Rayne said was wrong. Cute.
Good work as always! :D |
 tmelange1 2008-12-13 . chapter 3This story is riveting. I hope you get back to it one day. |
 TheColorOfTheInvisible 2008-11-28 . chapter 3You stoped it? Oh, no. Please, don't!
(you know me from LiveJournal, i'm your brazilian fan who try to write in english.) |
 InSilverShadows 2008-02-29 . chapter 2ACK. A flaw!
"He dumped the potatoes into the water and quickly washed off the dirt before leading Belaeden back inside and upstairs. He points out his room, and then the spare room – Wynnd’s old room -- across the hall. Belaeden steps inside without a word and shuts the door in Rayne’s face."
There's a big tense chance in this paragraph, into the present tense. It might be because the Once a Slaves are written in the present, but anyways, this story's so good, it ought to be perfect too. :P |
 InSilverShadows 2008-02-29 . chapter 1I'll be honest. Rayne is my favorite of all your characters, so it was delightful to get this little gem, but the title very nearly turned me off of it. |
 May47 2007-11-12 . chapter 3I've got to say, I love reading your writing. It's sorta hard for me to get into stories, but I've really loved yours and your characters. I hope you'll continue to update this story, because I'm really liking it, and I wait patiently for your published works! Good luck with all that by the way! |
 SerialXLain 2007-11-10 . chapter 3Aw... Poor Bel... :(
But Sactaren's goods (...I so got something dirty out of that...) are going to save the day right?!
xo |
 Valerie 2007-11-08 . chapter 3 Hi!
i'm a freind of Aysha (or snake in the grass) and I love all your stories, just figured i'd finally review and let you know!
Keep up the good work and congrats on gettng published!
-Valerie |
 AsiaLisek 2007-10-27 . chapter 3... i'm a total fan. i love your stories, your characters, yer way of writing. when you publish, i'll be there. i. will. be. there. debit card in hand.
ridiculously talented lady, **hugs**
~Joanna (asialisek) |
 SaraMaxine 2007-10-27 . chapter 3OMG!
yay!
You rock!
So, I definately love this story, as much or, surprisingly, more than Magebreak.
Please update this as frequently as possible.
~You get: Pop Rocks and Coke! For if you're ever contemplating suicide.~ |
 snarky fox 2007-10-25 . chapter 3 Oh my god! Update soon please! Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god! This is getting intense! I need more! ^^
S. fox |
 Amindaya 2007-10-25 . chapter 3Whoa! I don't remember them mentioning that happening in the story! I must have forgotten it. Poor Bel. And Rayne is just...amazing. Yep. :) |
 Midnights Scream 2007-10-22 . chapter 3So that's how he got into Sactaren's debt. :) it's cute in a sad sort way. I really like learning more about Bel though. he's always so quiet that it's amazing whenever you get even a hint as to who he is. I love Rayne to pieces. He's so cute in a spitfire sorta way. I like that he's taking such good care of Bel even though Bel didn't pay much attention to him or treat him very kindly. :) I really like it. You're an amazing story teller and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!:) |