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| Ramenluver 2007-08-26 ch 1,  | abuseI like how you said "denying its antiquity" I find that there is always one line in your poems that really stands out to me. Please publish something. lol -Ramen |
| Anaare 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseA wonderful sentiment, beautifully worded. Though the rhyming was a little forced here and there, I did enjoy this poem. Well done and thank you for the review! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you... |
| Julian Toepfer 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abusei really really like this. its short and to the point, but the words you choose give it a really eerie and forboding feeling. it makes me think of the world would be like after a nuclear war or something. the rhyme scheme is complex but still easily followable, and its just a fantastic peice! great job! |