haha. So true! Awesome job. So funny.

My god, you are a humor GENIUS :P! I'm so going to go & check out your other works :P

Very nice premise (as all becomes clear in the ten minutes earlier segment). I just wish I'd have learned that a lot earlier instead of getting ** for being preached at.

There's a slight problem with the dialogue the first two quotes of the first and second segments are said by the same person, and that was confusing since there was no narration.

Apart from that, there is nothing to comment on. B

OH MY GOD. Michelle, this is your best work yet. this is definitely your style. i laughed through the whole way. and i loved how you mention the thing about people being brain dead, how the whole beyonce thing like remember when we were listening to those war sounds on rememberence day in school and you said it sounded like beyonces song or something, im very glad you took that realizing experience and put it out there. im very proud of you. YAY!