I really liked this! I haven't thought about it too hard (yet) but it has a great rhythm - it flows really well.

Very, very good! WOW! I am impressed. I am also inspired. I'm going to put this in my bio.

i likes...

wow! when i read this the words felt like they had power in them that was cool. please read my story and tell me what you think of it, it's called "Into The Fire And Out" by winter of ice
enjoy, and keep up the good work^.^

IS YOUR NAME BY ANY CHANCE ELIZABETH? YOU SOUND ALOT LIKE HER AND IT'S KIND OF CREEPY.

O.o Woah... *blinks and looks again* Cool! Hehe. That was great. Yup. *nods head*

Beautiful.