|Reviews for Myspace Culture:Replicating reality|
| Fractured Illusion 8/2/07 . chapter 1
"a big concern is for young teenagers who have incomplete frontal lobe development which affects judgement and decision making skills."
*laughs* What a nice-sounding insult :P
Anyhow; very nice essay. Not sure what all those sources were for, but ah well You brought up good points and proper English as well.
Though your paragraphs really looked all the same. Try to vary the length a bit (since its a computer screen). Only suggestion though.
Keep it up!