Very sweet ending. Nevertheless, I vote epilogue. Definitely.

:)

Huh, as this story has progressed, Sam has genuinely proven himself to be the bigger a$$. I like that you didn't just randomly make him evil or a jerk all of a sudden but built into it, so Lila having an easier time going to Jack makes a lot of sense.

I like the layers of this cliche love triangle, which makes it very confusing to figure out who to root for. Good job!

Your writing is very good. You have a clear style and your characters are interesting. I just don't like that Jack messes with his brother's girlfriends, I think that is a really, outrageously cruel thing to do to a sibling. Jack is an a$$.

jeez belize,
your story is awesome i don't care if i stay up till one reading this. :)

love it =]

... oh shit bad jacky >_>

sdofk;dsjflkjsdf omfg they both like each other and OBVIOUSLY she doesnt like sam and jack doesnt like brooke lkdsfjlksdfjlksdfj -explodes-

Good story. I have a question though. I'm 24 so it just might be that I'm too far removed from the real high school scene, but are kids really losing their virginity in 8th or 9th grade?! Just curious. Pretty good story though, glad she ended up with the right dude!

OMG! This story brought me to tears... but I actually cry about everything these days... Im such a baby! Anyway this story was awesome!

One of the best ever fics on here...most of them aren't that great, but this one was damn good. Really realisitc! I was surprised to find out you were only a junior in high school, and I don't want you to be offended by that, but it comes across as if you've taken formal classes. The All Time Low thing was kind of a lightbulb of "Oh, she's probably in her teens."

BUT FANTASTIC STORY! I thought a lot of the characters were pretty realistic.

Totally off topic, but I accidentally ended up at an All Time Low concert the other night...

Okay, futher AWing at Jack.

AW JACKSON LIKEES HER! I like the realism. I had to go through the agony of liking someone I wasn't supposed to be with, and I definitely sympathize with how Lila feels. Not her *actions*, though but her thoughts definitely.

Wow. Jackson has a way of letting himself into her house a lot. LOL.

Okay so for the most part I like Lila, but I *really* don't think telling everyone about Caitlin was ANY of her business.