I really liked it, even though it was sad, it reached deep inside and pulled out some feelings i haven't felt in awhile.

I like ur writing style, it's unique and you use a lot of imagery. I also like how you repeat lines, and how in this poem you repeated "I saw him die" but each time you followed it with a new, different line. I like it better at the end without the "a hero. And I cried." It sounds really cool if you just leave it as "I saw him die."