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cbprice25 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abuseI like it; I'm intrigued. I know it's been I while since you've worked on this story, but if you update, I'd definitely continue reading.
The Bloody Sponge 2008-05-09 ch 2, anon.	abuseHello there. I read the story "Ghost Writer" and your story here was credited as inspiration, or what have you. Very unique perspectives comparing your work to that of your friend. While Hale cannot really feel the killer/interact personally (supposing it's not Hale) -- Blaine has become his puppet. I'm very saddened to read that you have put this one on hiatus. It would have been interesting to have read both alternate versions. I do congratulate you for an EXCELLENT villain and graphic, vivid descriptions. You made me want to vomit -- just like Blaine. That is a compliment. I do hope that someday you will pick this up again.
FormerNoAccountOnFP 2008-03-19 ch 2,	abuseWOMAN IS THERE A GENRE YOU -CAN'T- WRITE? You have a very witty comedy. A devinely sexual seductive supernatural romance. You have a quirky romance... And... then you have a realistically deep romance... AND THEN THIS PURE GENIUS. YOU BETTER UPDATE NOW!
candid 2008-03-12 ch 2,	abuseIs this the stalker story you were telling me about? In any case, I LOVED this. It kind of reminded me of a James Patterson novel. The killer has that same realistic edge that makes you cringe backwards in horror, but, at the same time, lean forward in fascination. I really like the way you portray him, and how he isn't interested in sex (like SO many of the other stalkers on this site are cough xDD) [You better pray, Blaine. I'm already aroused.] This line really creeped me out. Is he a sadist? He gets off on hurting people? That seems to add a new level of horror -- he doesn't need to be forced into harming people if it's something he enjoys doing. I picture him as having a very smooth, almost seductive voice, in contrast to his looks. [Think of this as a chain letter.] Ironic. Chain letters always threaten death (e.g. if you don't post this in the next five minutes, a dead girl will come to your house and kill your first born at 3am tomorrow), but this one's actually true. Or, in any case, I certainly perceive it to be true. [Blaine heard the clank of metal, and then a chilling noise that made him cringe; the sharpening of some metal object-- most likely, a blade.] I love this line. I can almost hear the shriek of steel. 10x worse than nails on a chalkboard, I bet. And I like the killer's sense of humor. It's very dry. ["If I point a gun at a pretty young lady like yourself, obviously, I plan to hurt you."] and ["If I'm threatening to kill you and want to go for a ride, then obviously I want something. Isn't that self-explanatory?"] He's so remarkably witty. If he wasn't a psychopath, I think I'd love him. It's also kind of cool that you didn't make him drop dead gorgeous. He sounds truly horrific. I notice you categorized this under romance. Is it going to be a Blaine x Nadiya pairing -- or is Nadiya going to develop affections for this horribly twisted man? How does he know her? In any case, I definitely think you should update! xCandid
Octello 2008-01-12 ch 1,	abuseThis is seriously creepy. My number one illogical fear is being burried alive. But I have to keep reading!
MizSphinx 2007-09-03 ch 2,	abuseit's all cool...its 11.21am and to go and translate that spanish u wrote is alot of horrors...so i'll just allow myself to be confused until tomorrow...again: great fic...you write well...descriptions are very good...kk...i'll shut up now...too sleepy...BUT...UPDATE SOON! :) --MizSphinx
MizSphinx 2007-09-03 ch 1,	abusewhat i think? LOL...i think this is fantastic work! You had me scrollin so fast, that i got so annoyed when my cell rang and interrupted me! Yes, I love suspense and there's not many on FP and the few that are there makes me look like this ( :s )lol. This is a very intriguing piece and so it MUST be added to my alerts and on the last note: keep up the great work! Reading on... --MizSphinx
Blue Devil012 2007-09-03 ch 2,	abuseWow, that was so intense! I can't believe he almost lost the numbers! XD I would be freaking out too, bleh. Please update soon!
lostinmydreams 2007-09-02 ch 1,	abuseawesome! I am very much interested I hope you continue!
Phai 2007-08-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseDange! Keep writing, I am riveted.
lose.of.wordsXoXo 2007-08-04 ch 1, anon.	abusewow I so0o0o love this story. it's the best! I really want you to write more! It's such a great idea! and your a great writer. please write more! --Krista Dominique--
Blue Devil012 2007-08-03 ch 1,	abuseThis is so interesting! Please continue!
Miss Aja Boliva Nicole 2007-08-01 ch 1,	abuseThis indeed has caught my attention. I've been keeping track of my favorite FP story (IHY!) and I think this may be the next on my story alert list. I like it a lot, even though I don't care to much for the cliche dark alley, but the glass coffin idea,i do like.
Nikkole15 2007-08-01 ch 1,	abuseI love it. It is devious. Scary and totally different from anything I have read. Smart plot and ideas. I can't wait for the next installment. :) -Nikkole
abc123 chewy 2007-08-01 ch 1,	abusei really like it... can't wait for you to continue it.

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