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| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-08-17 ch 1,  | abuseI really want a sequel! How lovely! I want to read more! |
| Gao Yun Yun 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseFirst review..I think..? Anyway, great one-shot! It was adorable, and yet, I could easily understand every one of every character's feelings. Even though you messed up here and there, I think you have a knack for things like this. Wonderful job! |