This is off to a great start and I can't wait to see what happens next. Their is nothing i hate more than unfinished stories. Update soon. Please. :)

I really liked the first story that you did with Janie and Mike and I really like that you continue with their story, a little bit on here. I hope that you continue on with this story as soon as you can.

update!

please!

megz

Like the girl, very sarcastic! Update soon?

O.o... good story! I can't wait 'til the next chapter! LoL imagine her baby-sitting the twins... Hehe they'd be all over her!

I took me 'til 2-3 paragraphs before the end of the chapter to figure out who this charactar was... and I'd just read the chapter mentioning her last night...

So. It's been a year. But no worries, I just hope this isn't abandoned. D

Really like it by the way and wow Dana sure turned out to be a bit of a bitch.

This is going to be very interesting. D

i love dana she is great and widows peak isnt he a little young to be balding or am i thinking of the wrong thing ?update soon

ok very differnt and yet interesting

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Please update soon.

heya, this was a great chappie. i can't wait for more to see what happens next Alenor.

update really soon

so cool that you have the minor characters from Janie and the Cretin in this story as the main characters.

KEEp Writing!

absolutly LOVE IT!

keep writing!