Wow. You managed to write it so it seemed like it actually did happen. Just wow.

this is absolutely gorgeous, you say that this never happened to you, but it totally sounds like it did, i really enjoyed this. keep writing:)

That was really descriptive. I love your writing.

This is really beautiful. I absolutely love the lines "I lay in the strip of overgrown grass outside/and watch the stars come out/wishing I knew [their] names". I've been there. The title is so perfect. Really nice work. So realistic!