I hate that guy. i guess you wrote this to vent out feelings, eh? That's the thing that's so interesting about you. You put all your feelings in writing, which i think shows that you're a true writer. I really liked it. Great job.

I DO NOT LIKE DANNY! Making her hurt like that, that's only too mean. But I'm glad you captured the feelings so well, the descriptions almost made me cry with her! You have a talent, I can see that already, and I only read one of your stories!

Wow, Brie.

What the frick is wrong with that boy? If you could call him a boy. Very well written. You made me feel for you, sister! I loved it. I expect to see more.

This was very personal. I'm sure it was hard for you to write it. I liked it, especially the quote "I really hurt you." I hate whenever someone says that. Good job.

The worst part about a breakup is that this is the person who knows you the best, and they use what they know to hurt you.
I guess things hurt more when you actually see the words because you have to guess what kind of tone they're using, you can't hear that.
I hope your boyfriend sees through him like you do, and everything works out well for you. This is written well, and the last line hits hard. Great job.

dumb ** mofo prick...thinking he's a freaking bamf...i'll kill him...

anyways...writing is good...i'm still going to kill him though...pray to god i dont visit anytime soon...

Hell yeah things hurt more in print. But, sometimes that chat speak dulls it a bit, but, that may just be me. I get where you're coming from, and this is a brilliant piece.
Is Danny really the guys name, though?
'Cause if it is I think you should change that, 'cause it makes it seem more like a personal attack, and that just ain't cool.