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| Raven Kay 2007-09-07 ch 1,  | abuseBest: Stormcat Originality: Henred5 Mechanics: Washi Chiisai |
| Washi Chiisai 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseSo very hoping that this isn't too late. My internet has been acting up and I finally got it to work :/ Mechanics: Dark Originality: Raven Kay Overall Best: Black Cat |
| lost?field0.mitted 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseoriginality: stormcat best: Washi Chiisai mechanics: myriad sorry for the slight delay, I know I'm a few days over the deadline. X.x Things get scrambled the first week of college. Internet is one of those things. |
| Jane Ellecot 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseAwesome job guys! Originality- Ylaomip Best- STormcat Mechanics- Washi Chiisai ^-^ |
| Myriadragon 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseI'm gonna go with Stormie for all three. |
| Myriadragon 2007-09-01 ch 14, | abuseHaving just gone through the whole "intro-to-college" thing, this kind of inanity sounds painfully familiar. Though for us, it tended to center more around muffins and science fiction. And how the drunk people are stupid. |
| Myriadragon 2007-09-01 ch 13, | abuseAmusing :) |
| Myriadragon 2007-09-01 ch 12, | abuseCool. A bit rushed, but cool. |
| Myriadragon 2007-09-01 ch 11, | abuseAhh, the kids from hell! That's why I never baby-sat...well, not after the first time... |
| Myriadragon 2007-09-01 ch 10, | abuseHnh. I'm kinda confused, but it's cool. |
| Myriadragon 2007-09-01 ch 9, | abuseSort of felt like a transitional piece rather than a stand-alone. |
| Myriadragon 2007-09-01 ch 6, | abuseI find myself incredibly confused. But amused, too. |
| Myriadragon 2007-09-01 ch 5, | abuseHm. |
| Myriadragon 2007-09-01 ch 4, | abuseThis draft is a definite improvement over the first draft, though it still has a bit to go. |
| Myriadragon 2007-09-01 ch 3, | abuseThis is a bit clumsy, but I like it. I think you have a really good story here, but it's a bit rough at the moment. |