You oftentimes restate things for emphasis.

In your stories, or from the ones I've read thus far, the male figure is constantly dominant and seeks more from his counterpart. Never satisfied.

Thanks for bringing it to fictionpress, twas a good read.

However I'd have to argue some points you brought up,
but sex in the woods seems to emphasize how pagan and godless their life is. Instead they find solace in one another.

OMG! I loved it!! Super Amazing

This is a beautiful story... you wrote it amazingly

hmm. i read this before as 'atonement,' but i guess i never reviewed. well, i love this one obviously. i like all the philosophical bits you wrote in the beginning. very interesting. =) vivid emotions near the end. evidently wonderful. =D

utterly fantastic.

-mel