|Reviews for Demons of the Heart|
| underdone 6/16/10 . chapter 33
i have just finished re-reading this and am so glad to find it's just as much fun the second time around.
| Krowhop 6/7/10 . chapter 34
Are you going to update soon? I would love an update... I think all your readers would love an update! Please? :D
| anon 5/21/10 . chapter 34
Are you going to update any time soon? I'd love to know what happens next...
| Ubiquitous Muffin Smuggler 5/3/10 . chapter 34
Hi! I just finished reading all 34 chapters of "Demons of the Heart," (yep in one go!) and I have to say this the best piece of work I've read in a long time, and possibly of all time. I love how you develop your characters because they're complex and not just straightfoward-I love you demons-type of characters. I really enjoyed reading the emotional relationships between Brad and Zero, Riley and Orin because there is a lot going on than just lust (jealousy, human/demon racial problems, power and authority) that complicate everything! My heart twinges every time there's conflict but it makes the story so intriguing because I don't know where you're headed. Also, the plot you developed is amazing. I really like the idea of demons picking out their humans by the way of Scent Triggers. Again, it's not like demons are automatically attracted to the first human they see. I look forward to what happens next. You did an amazing job! Thanks a lot for writing this!
| Kikinii 5/1/10 . chapter 21
OMG. im just going to say I read 17 chapters of your story straight, fell asleep then woke up and continued reading again. Your story is so fucking awesome, I really like it. Its not cliche at all.
| Nitya 4/16/10 . chapter 34
I like your story! Quite a lot actually :P I read it in almost one shot _ lol The characters are really interesting, especially their relationships and your fiction is really original I think... Sorry I don't have any constructive criticism to do :P I just like your fiction a lot :)
I'm looking forward the next chapter
| gallowsCalibrator 4/5/10 . chapter 34
I really like the story so far! Can't wait for you to update.
| music 4/2/10 . chapter 34
Just so you know, when reading this story, I am reading this story, I am reminded of the song "Strange" by Tokio Hotel (featuring Kerli).
Love the story, keep going. (:
| Wolf-in-sheep-clothing 3/29/10 . chapter 28
"No! We pat! We pat the butt!" Oh my God, I laughed for like five minutes. Oh God, i'm about to start using that in everyday conversation.
| Saeki-San 3/16/10 . chapter 34
LOVE this story
| narcissistic 3/13/10 . chapter 34
Seriously great chapter. AH I love coming back from grounding and having tons of great stories to read!
| Rustam 3/12/10 . chapter 27
The name Wendy just fills me with hate and the insatiable urge to bitch-slap someone. And the line "can you get me off" made me laugh so much, it was so clever!
| Rustam 3/12/10 . chapter 24
The way that you switch between characters really keeps me interested in the story. It makes it so that it doesn't become dull and boring. Keep writing please!
| Surab 3/11/10 . chapter 17
Wow, I love this chapter, It surprised me at every turn.
| Surab 3/11/10 . chapter 16
Ha! Zero and Brad are such idiots sometimes. They go great together.