|Reviews for Trivial Matters of War|
| lebuffle 8/2/07 . chapter 1
I don't believe this hasn't got any reviews!
I like "but all my towels are still damp" beacause it works both literally and metaphorically. I also like the way the hyphens make a break between the literal sense and the extended metaphor, with the combination at the end.
It's really neatly done. Good job!
"If you want a job doing, do it yourself".