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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseTerrific poem. It made me smile and make me think of myself. Most days I think I've heard everything when I know I haven't. |
| Master Tananh 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseSweet |
| Need 'n' Know 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseWhat are those things again, where you use imaginative words, like desert, for us readers to picture it? Ah, okay, dust and dust, like the desert. Yes, I think of dust in desert. :D I see the transgression, mental health to sane/insane. Don't know if you did that purposefully or not, though. Stanzas: 1. Desert 2. Mental health 3. Dust, ashes to ashes 4. Sane. I'm literally repeating myself. x_x 1 and 3; 2 and 4. Am I going crazy, too? O_o But "no story is too weird for you." ^_- Need 'n' Know |