Terrific poem. It made me smile and make me think of myself. Most days I think I've heard everything when I know I haven't.

Sweet

What are those things again, where you use imaginative words, like desert, for us readers to picture it? Ah, okay, dust and dust, like the desert. Yes, I think of dust in desert. :D

I see the transgression, mental health to sane/insane. Don't know if you did that purposefully or not, though.

Stanzas:

1. Desert

2. Mental health

3. Dust, ashes to ashes

4. Sane.

I'm literally repeating myself. x_x 1 and 3; 2 and 4. Am I going crazy, too? O_o But "no story is too weird for you." _-

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