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| Ramenluver 2008-07-10 ch 1,  | abuselol, The image of the Evil Kings lair sounded a lot like that of the Evil King of Tyranny, minus the mutant lizard men, the blackened trees, and oh, the volcano. The moral was great, too. XD -Ramen |
| Sally Can Wait 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was pretty much the most hilarious thing I've read in a long time. And much funnier than Monty Python, which I am not a big fan of. :) |
| Niek 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseWow, this story is pretty hilarious. It kind of sums up what NOT to do in a lot of fantasy fiction. I really liked the sarcasm and your story telling abilities. Good job. |
| B. Penn 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseSo very Monty Python-esque. Very, very good. One of the best parodies I've read. I have a particular fondness of Bob. I think it's the accent. "Black as some blind guys vision" Nice "The dragons spat archetypal fire at him which he managed to ward off by giving a self-confidant look." Hilarious. My personal favorite: "He landed gracefully, quickly smoked a cigarette and turned to face his enemy." Perfect mixture of absurdity and hilarity. |
| dragonflydreamer 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseReviewing for the Review Marathon! (link in profile) Haha, I love this story so much! I can't remember the last time I laughed this hard from a story! You brought up some very good points in this. I espacially loved how "Prince Bob" had a British accent in a world where Britain doesn't exist. That annoys me to no end in fantasy movies! I wish you had played up the cliches of the villian a bit more, though. You hinted at the fact that he was a stereotypical villian, but you didn't really display it with him specifically. Still, I adored this story! I hope you had as much fun writing it as I did reading it! |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuse...OH MY GOD I WANT TO HAVE THIS STORY'S CHILDREN, I LOVE IT THAT MUCH! --a.k.a. |
| Angelfacekrys 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuse*giggles* up until the end it reminded me of a movie. everything is conviently easy for the hero, and everything goes according to plan. then you come along and put your own lovely swing on the end. love it love it love it boii! *still giggling* "preformed a small moonwalk" hehe. ~*Angelfacekrys*~ |
| Firekeeper47 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseI must say, good job! I about died laughing towards the end. Again, great job! |
| Nameless Shadow 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseFallen God of War, Hermatis: Oh, wow, awesome! XD This was so funny! I espeically loved the ending. XD Love the name, too. Unpronounceable indeed. O.O Heh...everything was great. Pretentious knob, I'll say. ;) Lord of Darkness, Kaure: Yes, quite well-written and humorous, and also, on some levels, educational. It's quite interesting, how the prince had a British accent when there was no Britian. Heh. I was hoping he'd triumph at the end - he bloody well deserved it. ;) Very nice story here. |
| Future Walker 2007-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseNow THIS was a great read. I see your allusion to LotR. I also love your comparisons (the scream of the goblins thing takes the cake) and you know what? You write too damn well XD Great job! Best oneshot I have ever read :D G'day! |
| GrannyP 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseI could not stop laughing. Way to make my Friday morning enjoyable. More enjoyable even, since it is Friday, after all. The best parts were the cursed place with no vowels in the name, and the description of Evil King (six foot five inch tree with two legs... I thought I would DIE laughing). Well done. I think you should spend more time writing stuff like this in English than writing essays about King Lear. King Lear was a dweeb anyway. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. It was short and very amusing. The length of some of the names made me laugh along with the prince called Bob. Great job! Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a wonderful day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| The Candlelight Hour 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I love this, so faving it! I nearly fell outta my seat laughin' -CH |
| tree of life and shadow 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseOut of all the stuff i have read on Fictionpress, this is in the top two! It was hysterical! It reminds me of Monty Python. Dude, you are awesome. i salute thee. |
| aneman333 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseWonderful satire! Very humorous and, in a way, educational. :) |