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| MuzikalWriter 2007-10-20 ch 1,  | abuseAhh! It started out so innocently and then BAM! I was thinking, "Oh, this would be funny to read in my Creative Writing Worksh...oh. Nevermind." Wow. Mean cat! Nevertheless, I like it. One critique I have is that the transition from rhyming to non-rhyming was sudden and a little jarring. I'm not sure how you could fix that (I have problems with transitions myself) but that's the only problem I found. |
| ihrtbks 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseInteresting...and amusingly suggestive. And the cat thing was cute as well. |