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| Isca 2008-05-23 ch 1,  | abuseI liked the line, "Be my saviour, not my downfall." |
| nikkiRA 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abusethis is good... full of emotion, i really like it! good job. |
| Rose Valentine 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseI like this prose - full of mellow emotion! -: Good job! |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. It was a bit mysterious and confusing though...I am not sure that I totally understand it...But what I did I thought was nice and beautiful. Good work. =] |