 no.peace.los.angeles 2007-08-24 . chapter 1Interesting piece. I love the phrase "pillow revelry." That's so fun. I also love the line "So I crush this oar of a pen through the swiftest seas." Beautiful imagery there, and great verb use, too. I'm not entirely sure I get the poem, but dreams are really like that - just weird. Haha. Nice work. Keep writing! :) |