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no.peace.los.angeles
2007-08-24
ch 1,
abuseInteresting piece. I love the phrase "pillow revelry." That's so fun. I also love the line "So I crush this oar of a pen through the swiftest seas." Beautiful imagery there, and great verb use, too. I'm not entirely sure I get the poem, but dreams are really like that - just weird. Haha. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
Stella Grimshaw.
2007-08-02
ch 1,
abuseI loved this. The crow reminds me of the poem Edgar Allen Poe wrote. Great work though.
Ashelin
2007-08-02
ch 1,
abuseThis Crow reminds me somewhat of a muse. Anyway, I really enjoyed this. The odd though process that wasn't really a process at all. Great job.
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