Reviews for lessons learned while asleep

no.peace.los.angeles 2007-08-24 ch 1,	abuseInteresting piece. I love the phrase "pillow revelry." That's so fun. I also love the line "So I crush this oar of a pen through the swiftest seas." Beautiful imagery there, and great verb use, too. I'm not entirely sure I get the poem, but dreams are really like that - just weird. Haha. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
Stella Grimshaw. 2007-08-02 ch 1,	abuseI loved this. The crow reminds me of the poem Edgar Allen Poe wrote. Great work though.
Ashelin 2007-08-02 ch 1,	abuseThis Crow reminds me somewhat of a muse. Anyway, I really enjoyed this. The odd though process that wasn't really a process at all. Great job.