 risaisis 2008-06-07 . chapter 1Woah.
That was amazing! :) I really enjoyed reading it, your writing style is so clear, so beautiful. It's not over-detailed so that it distracts you from the story, but it gives enough detail to help paint a picture of what's going on in your mind. And the story, too, was incredibly. I loved it! At first, I wasn't quite sure what to make of Kimberly, but by the end I was happy for her ^_^ I also liked how Ella got her happy ending as well, though it might not have been the one she wanted, she's got someone who loves her for her XP
Also, thanks for reviewing This Story! I should be updating every other day, because I already have all five chapters writen out - so if you want to read the rest, just check back every day. Thanks again! ^^
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