OH man, I'm sorry. You see, recently the computer with the other three chapters of this short ten chapter story, was set to be reformatted. Now I'm on Vista. The other three chapters I thougtht weere already on FP but I remember I wanted to wait until I had three done. Uh, I dunno if I'm making sense, but in the end I thought I posted those three chapters. Sadly mistaken and looking today. I didn't.

Those long chapters are now lost. Don't worry, soon I'll get free time and rewrite this story. This is poorly delivered but I wil try to sit down and learn how to write again. I just gotta get back into my game.

I'm growing fond of Yomi. You play your female characters very well. I still love Bishop ^^ I hope to see another update from you, this is a wonderful story.

So far, this story has been a good read. I look forward to reading more.

~SirScott

Pretty cool intro chapter. It set the plot up nicely. Is President Eastwood, Clint Eastwood?

~SirScott

A wonderful story so far. I really like Bishop! I hope that you update soon!

Wow, just be reading the info, it seemed like an inspiration from 24, the series (Season 5).