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Reviews For: Atelophobia
ElianaMargalit 2009-08-18 . chapter 1
This is great. :D.
K.Andrews 2007-08-04 . chapter 1
Perfection, and those who strive for it so unceasingly, like this girl are tricky subjects. I like how you showed how meticulously she planned it, it created quite a feeling of tension for if she was caught by one little thing..
t-t-t-ouch. 2007-08-02 . chapter 1
Wonderful, sly, twisted, and cunning. I love it and the way you used the word perfect to mean wrong and right.
ShyFoxie 2007-08-02 . chapter 1
This is a very good short story. Congrats. It's nice how you twisted the words around so that she was finally 'perfect' when she really did do something wrong. I like the black humor.
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