Reviews for the calm after the storm

simpleplan13 2007-10-24 ch 1,	abusethe imagery is beautiful and I love the last three stanzas... very sad and beautiful
Charity F 2007-08-19 ch 1,	abuseYour answers to those questions are wonderful. It hurts, but still wonderful.
Kenk3n 2007-08-10 ch 1, anon.	abusequite good hehe, didn't know what ebb meant till now ^^; keep it going! i wanna read more!
recycle rhymes 2007-08-05 ch 1,	abuselove the imagery. just love this poem it's so pretty. the images connect together so perfectly. nice work.
Stella Grimshaw. 2007-08-04 ch 1,	abuseand those waves, those tides that ebb and reside (emotions...) Incredible. I loved so much how you compared emotion to a tide. Completely beautiful. Wonderfully done.
The Postscript 2007-08-03 ch 1,	abuseM. Couldn't agree more with the first reviewer - "Heart wrenching, heart aching ..." I especially love the lines "'why do you bleed?' (internally)/'why must those tears fall?' (invisible)". Great alliteration and word choice - it works nicely with the flow of the poem. I feel like this poem is a kaleidoscope, as no matter which way you turn it you will still see a diversity of colours. But it is also symmetrical and organized so as the message is not lost. You have a very informal style, but you don't let that affect the quality of the poem. Few can pull that off. Awesome work, again. Keep writing, k.
Katie Kat 2007-08-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseHeart wrenching... Heart aching... and exacly how I feel right now. Thank you.