the imagery is beautiful and I love the last three stanzas... very sad and beautiful

Your answers to those questions are wonderful.

It hurts, but still wonderful.

quite good hehe, didn't know what ebb meant till now ^^;

keep it going! i wanna read more!

love the imagery. just love this poem it's so pretty. the images connect together so perfectly. nice work.

and those waves,
those tides that ebb and reside
(emotions...)

Incredible. I loved so much how you compared emotion to a tide. Completely beautiful. Wonderfully done.

M. Couldn't agree more with the first reviewer - "Heart wrenching, heart aching ..." I especially love the lines "'why do you bleed?' (internally)/'why must those tears fall?' (invisible)". Great alliteration and word choice - it works nicely with the flow of the poem. I feel like this poem is a kaleidoscope, as no matter which way you turn it you will still see a diversity of colours. But it is also symmetrical and organized so as the message is not lost.

You have a very informal style, but you don't let that affect the quality of the poem. Few can pull that off. Awesome work, again. Keep writing, k.

Heart wrenching...
Heart aching...
and exacly how I feel right now.

Thank you.