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simpleplan13
2007-10-24
ch 1,
abusethe imagery is beautiful and I love the last three stanzas... very sad and beautiful
Charity F
2007-08-19
ch 1,
abuseYour answers to those questions are wonderful.

It hurts, but still wonderful.
Kenk3n
2007-08-10
ch 1, anon.
abusequite good hehe, didn't know what ebb meant till now ^^;

keep it going! i wanna read more!
recycle rhymes
2007-08-05
ch 1,
abuselove the imagery. just love this poem it's so pretty. the images connect together so perfectly. nice work.
Stella Grimshaw.
2007-08-04
ch 1,
abuseand those waves,
those tides that ebb and reside
(emotions...)

Incredible. I loved so much how you compared emotion to a tide. Completely beautiful. Wonderfully done.
The Postscript
2007-08-03
ch 1,
abuseM. Couldn't agree more with the first reviewer - "Heart wrenching, heart aching ..." I especially love the lines "'why do you bleed?' (internally)/'why must those tears fall?' (invisible)". Great alliteration and word choice - it works nicely with the flow of the poem. I feel like this poem is a kaleidoscope, as no matter which way you turn it you will still see a diversity of colours. But it is also symmetrical and organized so as the message is not lost.

You have a very informal style, but you don't let that affect the quality of the poem. Few can pull that off. Awesome work, again. Keep writing, k.
Katie Kat
2007-08-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseHeart wrenching...
Heart aching...
and exacly how I feel right now.

Thank you.
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