The original was my first favorite story on this site so maybe I am a bit biased but I don't really like the rewrite so far. I loved how in the the original there were these subtle hints about the relationship between Dylan and Isabella and it took a few chapters to get the entire story. In this chapter however it feels like a list of facts about each character spaced out only by some dialog. Perhaps in the next chapters you could try to leave the readers questioning a bit more about the relationships between everyone. Curiosity is definitely what will keep the readers coming back. Keep up the work :]

I can't wait to read about the first day they met.

This is such a good story so far! I'm only on chapter 8 but it's marvelous! :D I was just wondering...did you write the lyrics for this?

Wonderful storyline with nicely developed characters, but I'm wondering what happened to Chase Breakenin? It seems as though you had something in mind for him and then forgot about him.
Other than that, everything was tied up nicely. Nice :)

“Yes, but you usually pick more conservative clothes for the office, and these kind of clothes if you want to impress someone,” Isabella frowned as she took in her mother’s perfectly styled long hair, cream colored camisole, and what she could see of her lace blue skirt. “You look beautiful.”

“Are you trying to say that I don’t all the time?” Michelle frowned as she looked at her daughter.

“No, not at all, and you know that, I just want to know who the guy is,” Isabella insisted.

this confused me, i thought she was married to paul, that's how you made it out when dylan ended up at their house after his mom got drunk in the second/third chapter

loved it!!

A beautiful story. cant believe that bella's father would do that!

this story is amazing with a capital A! I read it in like a 2 days and i couldnt read it earlier today and i thought i was going to die. thats how in love with it i am...
~saira

How cute. a very fitting end. Loved it, great job!

yay. yayayayayayayayay.

did you write all of these lyrics?

oh. my. God.
this is one of the few stories ever that actually made me cry. maybe because i have sisters, maybe because ive had self-destructive friends, or maybe its just because its a powerfully written sory, but whatever it is, congrats.

"Yes yes a thousand times yes"?

Seems a little used, but whatever- I don't really care. :)

I'm sleepy. >.

Yay for Bella. I'm glad she got away with some pretty minor injuries and I love the story still! Great job.

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Crap! I hope Isabella is alright.
Dylan is so sweet, he loves her beyond knowledge.
It's so beautiful!

Please update as soon as possible