this is a cute metaphor... the way you wrote it is great because its so sing songy, which fits perfectly with the piece.. I also like the ending.. that last line was great

haha! i remember pilipino people...they're addicted to karaoke...

nice...

i remember this! it's really catchy haha i can almost hear a tune as i read it in my mind ;)

ohh.. i like the repetition in this

and this makes me smile.. especially the "It doesn’t matter/If you’re out of tune or in" because my friends tell me that i can't sing to save my life

lovely haiku :)