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| Corinna Shaa 2008-07-08 ch 1, | Very good poem, as well as the rhythm of it too. But I'm sorry... at the end, what was up the sleeve... ? |
| kayla 2007-08-03 ch 1, | nice... |
| EvanescentIdiosyncrasies 2007-08-03 ch 1, | I ** love this because it down-right honest with how the world is going. THANK YOU FOR POSTING IT! |
| Sierra Strom 2007-08-03 ch 1, | Wow, its so true. We put way to much pressure on poeple to be beautiful and perfect. This is not American at all, its brutal and awful. I think you did really good, and you added some humor, so you get a high five. With Something Like Love, Somthing Sucidal |
| Daiysis 2007-08-03 ch 1, | Wow. All I can is WOW! To anyone who is living in blissful ignorance this definitely a eye-opening piece for them. Awesome piece of work. |