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Reviews For: Pick Your Poison World of Today

Corinna Shaa
2008-07-08
ch 1,
Very good poem, as well as the rhythm of it too.

But I'm sorry... at the end, what was up the sleeve... ?
kayla
2007-08-03
ch 1,
nice...
EvanescentIdiosyncrasies
2007-08-03
ch 1,
I ** love this because it down-right honest with how the world is going.
THANK YOU FOR POSTING IT!
Sierra Strom
2007-08-03
ch 1,
Wow, its so true. We put way to much pressure on poeple to be beautiful and perfect. This is not American at all, its brutal and awful. I think you did really good, and you added some humor, so you get a high five.

With Something Like Love,
Somthing Sucidal
Daiysis
2007-08-03
ch 1,
Wow. All I can is WOW! To anyone who is living in blissful ignorance this definitely a eye-opening piece for them. Awesome piece of work.
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